Wednesday, July 23, 2008
How far will you go to make that story authentic?
Well, I am two chapters away from completing the first draft. But something is still missing. I have the sex scenes in there, but they just don’t feel quite right.
This is my first threesome, so I can’t write from experience. I have read some other books in this genre, but you know you want your own voice.
So you know what I did? I went to an Adult Video store and took my hubby and our mutual best friend – who is so fine it’s unreal!
It was crazy folks
This is the email I sent three of my friends in my email loop. Viola (manager of IMRR) told me I should post this and that is want I am doing.
So without further delay, read on!
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OMIGOD!
Okay let’s start from the beginning. First off Giuseppe (my husband) wanted to drive. Dang it! But we grabbed our mutual friend and headed to the Adult store or in the general direction. Now I told Giuseppe I wanted to stop at this jewelry place that is across the street from the store. If I was driving we would have went straight there.
So he’s like cool. And I told him we could just hang out and go to dinner somewhere. So he’s like cool.
Hehehe. So we get to the jewelry story and I get a couple of things. Then I say: “Hey let’s check out that place I’ve always been curious.”
They both look at me.
So we go in. Now the place is a pretty pink place. Don’t let that fool you. They have X, XX and XXX rated movies. What the hell is triple X! X-rated is X rated right?
Anywho, I drag the guys to the counter and the clerks greet us. I ask them “I’m looking for straight ménage a trios videos that are Interracial. I want the ones with two white men and a black woman only.
Their eyes got THIS BIG! and so did their smiles. ROFL! They just looked at us. And I looked back at the guys and the friend was looking at Giuseppe asking him if he knew about this and who’s idea was it. And Giuseppe is looking at me with that “When I get you home and there are no witnesses.”
Now, they had A LOT of IR threesome videos. Guys, it’s amazing what is out there.
Anyway, I’m in the aisle looking at all the videos while the guys are trying to sneak out. I call them over all loud and country. “Hey guys here’s the perfect one for us!”
They come over but grudgingly. ROFL. Now I asked the clerk I didn’t want any butt sex. But they said ALL these types of videos have butt sex. Thank goodness for fast forwarding.
Okay, now here’s where it really gets funny. The lady clerk took me aside and made suggestions. There are some vids (that’s what they call them) that are made by women. Cool. Just as nasty but more plot oriented. Whatever. LOL.
So I looked at those. Guys, this stuff is CRAZY! We got two vids by the way One called Black Maids – don’t even ask! And one called Sistahs with White Boy Toyz.
The male clerk said if I really wanted to get things going to get the XXXX stuff. WHAT THE HELL IS XXXX NOW!! The ménages have more close-ups and the sounds are great. Now this is where Giuseppe and our mutual friend decide to get back at Stephanie for pulling this stunt. Because at this point I am ready to run out of this place.
Giuseppe asks the clerk are there any vids with Italians and black women.
“Oh yes, we have a foreign section right here.”
I wanted to scream.
They drag me to the section . Yep Brazilian men and woman, Spanish men and women Italian men and women All kinds of combos.
Giuseppe turns to our mutual friend (did I tell you he was as fine as the day is long?) and asks him. “Which one do you think my bella with like? These two guys look more like us than the ones she picked”
I wanted to run, change my name and leave the country!!!!
Then they look at the toys. Giuseppe looks at vibrators. “Hey, bella this is perfect. We can both use this on you.”
Did I mention I wanted to leave the country? Make that get on the next Space Shuttle!
Mutual friend is like looking at me all lecherous going “Yeah. The clerks are getting their jollies; probably going to talk about this when they get home.
AAAARRRGGH!
So we purchase the two vids that I mentioned earlier and get back in the car. Giuseppe looks over at me and says; “That’s what you get for trying to pull a fast one.” Our friend is like “I didn’t know if you were serious or what!”
Now dig this. Giuseppe and I get home after eating out and dropping off our friend. Now through dinner Giuseppe is telling me what a bad girl I was. Friend however is quiet. He joins the conversation, but the wheels are turning.
But anyway, we got home and Giuseppe and I both started laughing again Because after all when you stop and think it’s typical “us”. But then we both stopped and looked at each other.
Why didn’t our friend make a big issue out of this?
I told Giuseppe to call him and ask a few questions. He said he was kinda scared to. LOL. I told him same here. So we both decided it might be best to not hang out with him for a while. ROFL!!! Because neither one of us really want to know the answer to this.
Now I asked Giuseppe since he’s a dude and I know he’s watched this stuff, What was the difference with the X, XX, XXX and oh please XXXX.
He said the XXXX has everything you can imagine and not imagine. Now our vids are XXX. He said it will show CLOSE UPS of all the body parts, they don’t use condoms at all. We will see ahem….actual come shots CLOSE UP. There will be a lot of screaming mostly on the woman’s part.
Oh yeah. Black Maids here’s the plot:
White guy has maid. Wife is out of town **rolls eyes** he invites neighbor over and they have there way with her. At first she resists, but they are that good that she begs for it. Whatever.
Sistahs with White Boy Toyz. Black girls get it one with white guys.
These are deep folks. ROFL!
Man I can’t believe I am going to watch this stuff! Giuseppe and I will probably be too busy laughing.
Friday, May 02, 2008
The Fun Continues!!!!
I got such great responses from my first posting of Detention that I felt confidant enough to do a second.
Now just to let you guys know, I'm having trouble formatting in this blog. Spaces, indenting are not my friends here. LOL!
I'll get the hand of it by the time I do another posting-I hope
This is the next chapter and the set up is this.
Brett is having Mia call her boyfriend to break tings off. He's not gonna have any man touching his woman.
That would be fine, except Mia as to be in a..ahem...certain position while she's talking to Tim.
Enjoy
“That looks wonderful,” he said coming to her.
The teddy was like an extreme body suit with cut outs in all the right places.
Her full chocolate breasts where expose as well as her crotch and rear. The man that invented this needed to win the Nobel Prize, Brett mused.
The leather was like a second skin on her. She was even sexier with this on than just stark naked.
“Turn around for me.”
She looked at him with a slight grimace, then did as she was told.
“Perfect, except for one little item.”
“A robe,” she said in a tone that was obviously defiant.
“Watch your tone with me Mia, I don’t want to punish you this early.” He stepped back and took another good look at her then handed her the finishing touch.
“What’s that?” Mia looked up at him eyes blazing. It was going to be fun bringing her to submission. Hard, but fun.
“It’s a Sub collar,” he said trying to look as serious as possible, because at the moment the look on Mia’s face was hilarious.
“I am not putting on a dog collar.” Mia crossed her arms over her bare breasts and looked straight at him. She was actually challenging him.
Well it was time to show her how this game was actually played. “Very well.” He placed the collar on the stool. He then reached over and grabbed Mia.
“Wha…what are you doing?”
Brett turned her around so her back was against his chest. He then began fondling her breast slowly. He then moved on to her stomach until he was at the edge of his final destination.
“No.” Her voice was breathy and she was squirming under his touch.
He didn’t say a word; instead he proceeded with his assault. When he found the magic spot he began slowly rubbing her clit. She bucked like a wild horse nearly making him lose his balance.
“Brett!” She went to reach for his hand but he stopped her by slapping her hand away.
“You cannot touch yourself unless I say so.”
“Oh Brett!” Her head tossed back and forth.
“Put you hands to your side.” He waited as she did as she was told. Then continued. “Ah Mia, you are so wet, I love a woman that is wet for me. This is for me isn’t it?”
“Yes,” she moaned.
“Mmmm, lets see how close I can get you to come.” He inserted another finger, going in and out of her faster and faster.
“Oh Brett, yes, faster, please!”
“You’re ready to come aren’t you?”
“Yeeesss!”
He then stopped and slowly removed his finger from her tight channel. He handed her his cell phone. “Call Tim now!”
“Brett! No! Please, why did you stop?” Her voice was on the verge of sheer panic.
“Dial his number and tell him anything you want, as long as the final outcome is that it’s over between you.”
“But Brett.” She reached for him but he pulled away. “Don’t leave me like this!”
Brett forcefully placed the phone in her hand. “On your knees and call him, then maybe I’ll finish where I left off.”
“I can’t talk to him like this, I can’t talk to anyone like this!” Her eyes were pleading and she was just short of screaming at the top of her lungs.
Now this was more like it.
“On your knees.” He pointed to the floor.
She let out a whimper and got on her knees. She looked up at him with pleading eyes. He wasn’t going to budge on this one
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She began dialing with noticeably trembling hands.
He then stood behind and directly above her. He leaned over and began to caress and massage her breast. “Talk normally,” he whispered in her ear.
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“Hey Mia, I just called you, where are you? I thought maybe we could catch a movie.”
“Um…I…don’t…think….” Mia removed the phone from her mouth as she let out a gasp. Brett was now on his knees behind her and those strong hands of his were doing things to her body that was probably illegal in some states. “Brett please,” she said as low as possible.
“Do you want me to take the phone and finish the conversation?” he whispered in her ear.
Mia closed her eyes and tried to refocus. She then came back the phone. “Um…Tim….”
“Are you okay babe?
No, there is a man playing with my pussy as I’m talking to you and it feels fantastic! Brett’s fingers were back on her clit, circling it slowly as he kissed and licked her neck and shoulders. “I’m fine, I think I’m coming down with something. Anyway I wanted to ask you something, I’m glad I caught up with you.”
“Really? Sounds serious, what is it?”
At that moment Brett began picking up the pace, Mia was now on the verge of a mind-blowing climax! Please don’t let me come while on the phone with this man, because Brett’s name will be the only thing on my lips.
Mia was biting down on her lip almost drawing blood as Brett pushed his fingers deeper inside her. “Tim,” she squeaked loudly. “What…do…you think about settling down and starting a family? Whew! She got that out in one breath.
There was an uncomfortable pause on the other end of the phone, then. “Um, Mia, you know you said you didn’t feel too well, so I’m going to let you go to get some rest. I’ll…call you later.” He disconnected.
Mia dropped the phone and was now on all fours. Brett stopped, took her by the waist and laid her on her back. He spread her legs wide and pushed his tongue deep inside her.
“Brett! Oh God, yes!” Mia nearly came up off the floor as her orgasm hit like a hammer. She never saw stars before but she could swear she saw a whole galaxy of them.
She lay there panting, her eyes closed as she waited for her body and soul to return to earth.
Brett took her hand and pulled her up to a sitting position facing him. “See what happens when you get smart with your master?”
She nodded, still in a haze. Then the realization of Tim’s reaction hit her.
Brett stared at her trying to read her face. She turned away trying to focus on something else—anything else.
He gently took her chin and made her look at him. His expression was solemn.“He’s a fool for not even considering your proposal.”
Thursday, May 01, 2008
Excerpts and My Muses for Detention!
This is the premise of the story.
It’s BW/WM, younger man/older woman {lovin’ it already!}. It also has elements of light bondage and BDSM.
There is a twist in this story. The Dom is a former student of the teacher – Miss Mia Bradford.
Brett Wyndam has had the hots for her since his senior year and wanted to do naughty things to her them. Of course that wasn’t…ahem possible.
But now he’s a grown man and he’s come back to take care of some unfinished business!
Here are the characters in Detention.
Now enjoy the little tease. This is well into the story and Mia is shocked by her former students confession
“You know Mia, I have a secret, something I’ve been keeping to myself since my senior year in high school.” He leaned into her, his face serious.
The smell of expensive cologne and pure male made Mia’s stomach tighten, and her grip on reality weaken. She tried to refocus on making a quick exit but then something clicked in her head.
Brett Wyndam had a secret? Now that more than piqued her curiosity. Mr. Big Man On Campus, the boy now a man that seemed to have the world on a string was hiding something?
“Okay, what’s your big secret?” She paused looking into those baby blues. Then she let out a slight gasp. “Don’t tell me – you’re gay.”
The response she got wasn’t what she expected. He threw back his head and burst out laughing. “Oh Mia, I am very, very straight, which I will be more than happy to confirm for your benefit, but more on that later.” He took her by the arm and led her into the living room.
“No Mia, the secret I have is that I’ve been a very bad boy,” he said with the most perverted smirk she’s ever seen.
“So what else is new,” she said nervously and sat down on the couch. What did he mean confirm with her later? She subtlety closed her thighs together tightly, trying to keep her arousal in check. He’s still younger than you. He’s still that boy you kept after school. That would be her mantra as he continued talking to her.
“You don’t understand Mia, in high school I was a different kind of bad.” He joined her on the couch but this time he kept a safe distance from her.
“Whatever. All I know is I had to keep you after school for detention for half your senior year because of your shenanigans.”
“Ah yes,” Brett said nodding his head. “But there was a method in my madness.”
“Really? Getting in trouble and almost throwing away a perfectly good edu….”
“But I didn’t throw it away, I was valedictorian remember?”
How could she forget, he was just about perfect in everything, and his charm kept others from labeling him a nerd and picking on him, that, plus his size.
He kept a 4.0 average throughout his school year. He aced all of his tests even in her class. But yet he insisted on getting into trouble. She could never understand people like him. He had it all but seemed to want to throw it all away as a teen.
And here she was, busting her butt teaching kids that didn’t have a tenth of the privileges that he had, who were trying to stay out of trouble in spite of growing peer pressure and their environment.
What a waste.
“So why did you get in trouble if you didn’t have to?” she asked in her most pious tone.
“To be near you.”
Mia nearly choked on her orange juice. “What?” she coughed out.
“I wanted to be near you so bad. Day after day I sat in your class and just thought of ways I would fuck you.”
“Brett!” She jumped up from the couch but Brett grabbed her arm and pulled her back down. The look in his eyes gave her pause.
“I sat there looking at you, dreaming of ways I could make you come. Those times that you made me run errands and other menial tasks only heightened my fantasies.
“Half my senior year I spent in your office under your control like your little slave boy. Doing everything from taking notes to teachers’ offices to organizing your desk. But I didn’t mind. When I turned eighteen at the beginning of my senior year, it was then that I realized that I was closer to my goal.”
Mia’s eyes got wide.
“Oh yes, I planned it all out one special night.” He pulled her closer to him, her lips almost touching his. It was maddening. “I think you might remember that night.”
He pulled her even closer and gently brushed his lips against her collarbone. She heard herself gasp and felt her body tremble. “It was the night after I “accidentally” threw an ice cube in a bucket of acid in chemistry class. There was a hole the size of a basketball in the roof of professor Kline’s class.”
“Ye…yes, I remember that very day, it was your claim of it being an accident, and your daddy’s influence that kept you from being expelled.” Mia tried to sound as professional as possible. Which was impossible with his lips on her skin and the way Brett was holding her, looking at her, making her senses go numb.
“Yes, dear old dad,” he said with no humor in his eyes. “Anyway, you being the Assistant Principal had no choice but to punish me.”
“Even though you said it was an accident, somehow I knew better….”
“You were right, I did it on purpose knowing the inevitable outcome. But I was expecting a big payoff this time. I wanted a special birthday present.”
Mia stared at him barely able to move. His hands gripped her wrist like a vice. Her body was humming to life, once again thinking about those strong hands on her body. Just like she used to do seven years ago.
But he was still thirteen years younger than her and for some reason that bothered her. But boy, what she wouldn’t give to just indulge for one night….
“Wha…what did you have in mind for your present?” she asked nervously as she tried to break free from his grip again.
“I had it all planed out, I even had the materials in my car.”
“Mater…materials?” She began to shake. Brett always both intimidated and excited her even as a teen, it was no different now.
“Mmmm, yes, you see you kept me a prisoner and under your control for half a semester and you seemed to enjoy it. I noticed that you liked control very much. I saw how you interacted with your staff. You walked into a place as though you owned the room and no one could speak out of turn. You got off on that. Well guess what? I get off on power too.”
Mia thought a moment. Was she like that? A control freak? She would be the first to admit that she was a little on the anal-retentive side, but not to the point of being a micro manager or taskmaster.
And what about that statement he made about her getting off on keeping him prisoner, what did he mean by that? Did she really enjoy it the way he said she did?
She did get off on the fact that he was in her office. Looking at this strapping young man was a guilty pleasure that she indulged in more often than she cared to remember. But did he know?
Those days when she went home she had the most forbidden thoughts about Brett. Thoughts that she could have gotten arrested for even though he was eighteen. She was ashamed at first. Then the fantasies and dreams came more frequently and she decided not to fight them any more. Instead, she indulged in self-pleasuring as she thought of him.
That was her secret.
But it seemed Brett was able to figure that out without even asking.
“I have invited you here for other reasons Miss Bradford.”
She jerked her head up. The way he addressed her just then sent a shiver down her spine, it sounded so sexy.
“You don’t really need the letter?” Her voice was noticeably shaky. What did he have in mind? Why did he come back to Cincinnati in the first place if not for the letter?
Maybe he was right. Maybe she did get off on control, because at this moment she was out of control and her comfort zone—and she didn’t like it one bit.
Brett chuckled then brought her hands to his lips. That sexy sweet looking mouth of his kissed each knuckle tenderly.
Mia wanted to scream. How many times had she fantasized about those lips on her skin and on her pussy?
No! She couldn’t let those thoughts resurface. Now she didn’t have an excuse not to act on them. He was no longer her student and he was no longer eighteen.
He then took her hands and rubbed the backs of them across his face. The roughness of his five o’clock shadow turned her on even more—if that were possible.
“I don’t need a letter from you,” Brett said, his eyes closed in ecstasy as he seemed to enjoy the feel of her hands. “In fact,” he continued, “the kind of letter I need would come from science teachers. I just needed an excuse to get you here. I have something I need to show you, something I think you would appreciate.”
He stood up and brought her to her feet as well. “Come with me Mia.”
He guided her through the hall then down some steps leading to his basement. They then walked down a long decorative hallway. It was done in royal blue and silver with sconces that lined the wall. They were dimmed, so the hallway was dark, except for the spots of light that lined the wall.
He then stopped and she found herself standing before a tall wooden door with antique hardware along the sides.
“What I am about to show you cannot leave this house. I hate to admit this but I do care about my position in the community. If this were to get out, the whole community would have a heart attack. But more importantly, my work and what I am trying to accomplish will be ruined.”
“And what’s that?”
He put two of his fingers on her lips. “Shhhh, that’s not important right now and has nothing to do with this, but you will see why you mustn’t say anything.”
Mia’s curiosity was piqued again. This man had a lot of secrets for someone that seemed to have it all together. She crossed her arms over her chest and sighed. She didn’t want to show too much interest, but she was on pins and needles.
“Okay I promise. You know you have my word.”
He unlocked the door not once letting go of her wrists with his one hand. In fact she thought she would loose the circulation in her hands if he didn’t let go of her soon.
He opened the door and to her relief let go of her wrists. He swept his hand into the room gesturing for her to enter first. When she did and her eyes adjusted to the darkness in the room, she was more than taken back.
“I…I” She heard the door slam shut and the lock click into place. When she turned, she saw Brett leaning against it. His grin was menacing yet incredibly sexy and those baby blues burned into her skin.
“Welcome to my dungeon Mia. You are now my prisoner and my sexual slave.
Sunday, April 27, 2008
Updating my Blog and You!
Yes, I know it’s been a long, long…long time since I’ve updated my blog.
Some of you probably even forgot I had a Blog!
A lot of you are members of IMRR and see me post there with updates and such, and I too have been complacent about posting to my blog, figuring that since I posted on the IMRR board that’s all I need.
So wrong. This is my personally little spot, a corner of my room where I allow everyone to visit and I let ya’ll know what’s going with me, give my opinions on any topic and various views on writing and the publishing industry in general.
Well let’s pick up as though there were no interruptions! LOL!
As you know from the last post, I had a little manuscript that I was working on called Detention.
Well I submitted to Ellora’s Cave and it made it past the first reading
WHOO-HOO!
Now the waiting begins. *SIGH*
Ellora’s Cave has become the NY Mass Market publisher of epubs.
But let’s face it fellow writers. If you want your work to be taken seriously AND you want it to be with an epub that’s going to last more than a minute, there are some sacrifices you have to make.
Ellora’s Cave was the first and the best epub out there.
Now if you’re a member of IMRR, you know that every now and then some one is posting about another epub that’s bit the dust or jerking authors around.
EC, Loose-id, Phaze, Red Rose and a couple of others (and please forgive me if I don’t mention you) are the only few that have weather the storms of the epub fiascos.
Now, I will start posting excerpts of Detention on my blog.
I will also introduce another story you might remember.
Personal Trainer.
Now this story was to be a short short. It has now turned into a full novel.
How? Why?
You know how it is. If you start like the characters you give them background, foreground, little idiosyncrasies.
You make them three dimensional, which makes your plot more detailed and so on and so on.
That’s what happened with Personal Trainer. I liked Bruce’s character, I gave him a deep background and a…..dare I say it? A hidden past!
Jasmine, is now a victim of Bruce’s past and is coming in between them and…
Well, you get the picture.
This story is almost finished, I have one more chapter to add, look it over and I’m Submitting it to Red Rose Publishing.
I don’t think I can handle the long wait from EC twice in a row. LOL!
Well that’s it so far. As the days and weeks go on, you will be noticing updates to links and things on the side.
Once again, my apologies for abandoning you and I will make sure that I blog something at least once a week to keep all my fans abreast to what’s going on.
Wednesday, April 04, 2007
I am back and still writing!!!
Well let me give you a brief update.
For those of you that belong to the MSN Group IMRR (Interracial/Multicultural Romance Readers), you already know.
I married my best friend of 20 some years Giuseppe Spalino. The last time you heard from us we were going to Sicily for his sick father, then Torino for the Olympics. My how time flies.
Well, after a long honeymoon - We sailed the QM2 World Cruise - 86 days! Man! That's a lot of time at sea! I am back with a vengence!!! LOL!
Anywho, I have been writing all this time. And guess what? I got some stuff ready to go.
The first is my Light BDSM novel Detention. I am putting the finishing touches on that and I will be submitting it to Ellora's Cave or Loose-id.
The second thing is my Mass Market book Mystery/Romance The Boys in the Band is being seriously considered by a regular publishing house. WOOHOO!!. They sent it back with suggestions on improving and editing.
I will be putting up excerpts for all these works in the days to come.
Personal Trainer is another IR romantica book, that I will be finishing after Detention.
Then who can forget With Friends Like These. The Vamp/Were IR Menage. I will be finishing that also, hopefully by later this spring.
So that's what's been going on with me. A lot huh? LOL!!
Stephanie
Monday, October 31, 2005
Going out of town w/my honey for a family crisis
Anyway I can't tell you how my heart breaks seeing the rock of my universe fall to pieces. I don't blame him, that's not my point. But seeing him cry shakes me up a bit. I feel helpless at times and I just clam up and let him have his moment. I don't know what to say to him. I've known him for 19 years and something like this has got me tongue tied!
He told me just being there was enough. I guess that's what I will have to except.
Right now we are concentrating on his mother who is 93, Papa Spalino is 97. They have been married for a little over 70 years! We both have to be strong for her.
I will keep you posted, we don't know what to expect when we land and I don't know how long I will be there. Papa Spalino is a well respected man in his town, so it's going to be interesting.
Stephanie
Tuesday, October 18, 2005
It's been a While/What I'm working on.
Well, I finally got myself all caught up now, so I’m baaack!
I have two projects, one project is old and the other is new.
This is what I am working on.
The first is an IR Vampire/Werewolf, Ménage a Trois story. It’s called With Friends Like These. I submitted it to Loose-id a while ago. The Editor made comments and suggestions and I have been working diligently (among other things going on in my life. LOL!). She said she would really like to see it again and that was very encouraging. Yeah!
The Second story is an IR, BDSM, Younger man/Older woman story called Detention. I figured that someone should tackle that issue. I mean, how many Interracial, Bondage, younger man older woman stories are out there? I hope not too many. LOL!
Anyway, I am on chapter 13 of this story and it’s coming along great. This one I was split on as far as where I was going to submit it. It was suppose to be a quick e-book, erotic read and that was it. But then the characters and plot took a life of their own and I believe that I can get it in the Mass Market.
So that’s what’s going on with me and my writing at the moment. I will put up excerpts of my writings as soon as I get a publishing date. Cross your fingers.

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